The topic “How I Learn and Study” was the topic that Ms. Purvis gave to us and my thesis was built around the topic.
My research was my life experience; Learning Styles quiz results, and things that I have tried.
The most challenging part of this essay is making sure that I have answered all the questions and have my paper properly written. I am worried that I have not done what is expected. The easiest part was writing my thoughts.
I wrote the paper by myself. I had a friend look over it. I also used PaperRater.com.
The results on Paper Rater were a 75. I went back and worked on the grammar suggestions. I was confused and unsure on what to fix in the style section. The results state that, having a passive voice was detected. Also I did not make good word choices. I did try to rephrase some of them, but I am not sure if I did it right. …show more content…
The least satisfying for me was to see the 75. Which I pray is not my grade, because I thought I did well, but I guess the focus is to do your best.
I feel that I have explained how I study and what I need to do to sharpen up my study skills. I am not 100% confident in the organization of my cover letter, because I have never did one before and I am not sure if my thesis was strong enough, but I did not want to put too much into it, because of the comments I received last