Aside from having strong strengths I still had some things to work on. Some of these are: (1) Volume of my voice. I noticed when watching my speech video cast that some parts of my speech were hard to hear. I should have raised my voice at the parts of the speech. This was a personal error. I thought I was speaking loud enough but it’s important that I keep that in mind. (2) Changing my position. I wished I could have moved more towards the center of the room. The reason why is because I faced my group of classmates, not to the entire room. It probably could have made my speech better and would have been easier to work on my body language. (3) Repeating words. Since I didn’t have an outline with me on stage, I was basing my entire speech off my memory. When I was giving my presentation, I didn’t realize that I was repeating some words or sentences over and over. For example, “we wanted to visit him. Sadly, sadly he didn’t let us.” This only happened in a few parts of the speech but something I do want to work
Aside from having strong strengths I still had some things to work on. Some of these are: (1) Volume of my voice. I noticed when watching my speech video cast that some parts of my speech were hard to hear. I should have raised my voice at the parts of the speech. This was a personal error. I thought I was speaking loud enough but it’s important that I keep that in mind. (2) Changing my position. I wished I could have moved more towards the center of the room. The reason why is because I faced my group of classmates, not to the entire room. It probably could have made my speech better and would have been easier to work on my body language. (3) Repeating words. Since I didn’t have an outline with me on stage, I was basing my entire speech off my memory. When I was giving my presentation, I didn’t realize that I was repeating some words or sentences over and over. For example, “we wanted to visit him. Sadly, sadly he didn’t let us.” This only happened in a few parts of the speech but something I do want to work