College Admissions Essay: What Makes Me Who I Am

Even though there are many things that make me who I am, only few help contribute to the fact that I am very persistent. The dictionary definition of persistent is as follows: continuing firmly or obstinately in a course of action in spite of difficulty or opposition. My obsessions, hobbies, characteristics, achievements, and aspirations help me to always remain persistent. To begin with, many of the things I love factor into my persistence. I enjoy reading, and have a tendency to easily obsess over new words, quotes, Nicolas Spark’s novels, and organized libraries. My determined mind helps me to have the ability to read and write as I wish. Similarly, I also love planners and pens that help me stay organized when I set goals to accomplish an objective. I obsess over smiles, laughter, music, the color pink, and kind gestures because these help me always be positive and optimistic, and see the better side of every situation. I also love dresses, shoes, …show more content…
When I was a toddler, my dad always told me to “BYB,” meaning to “be my best.” I’ve always taken this to heart and have tried my best in everything I do. Outdoor activities and sports such as tennis, cross country, track, jeeping, hiking, and mountain-biking help me realize I am capable of much more than what I thought was possible. On a different note, I’ve also been blessed with musical talents such as singing and playing that piano. Through this, I’ve accomplished tasks I never thought were possible without hard work, the drive, and dedication. I also enjoy developing talents that will help me with possible future occupations. For example, doodling, calligraphy, and writing on my iPad help me to not only practice these skills, but to also learn the programs and systems used. Finally, a few time wasters help me to relax and have the necessary down time in everyday life. These are shopping, texting, and watching