Jenny's Troubles: A Narrative Fiction

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It's 9:00p.m. in Boston, Massachusetts. Jenny is a 14 year old girl who just finished getting ready for bed. That's when she notices that her little 6 year old brother’s light was still on. That's odd she thought Ben should have gone to bed hours ago. Jenny slowly opens his door and sees that Ben is pretending to be Spiderman again. Ben freezes wondering if his mom just caught him saving Spiderman but, he sees that it is just Jenny he relaxes just a little bit.
“Get back to bed, you should have been asleep hours ago. Is there a problem?” said Jenny.
“Yes. Spiderman is, he is in big trouble. Doc. Oc has him and I need to, I need to save him and, and you are stopping me,” said Ben.
“I see now.” said Jenny. “How about this, if I tell you a
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Spiderman was thrown off guard and barely escaped The Prince’s sharp blade.
Nick looks up, startled by the sudden noise of battle. Then Nick’s worse fear Spiderman is in trouble. Nick franticly looks around for something to throw, and then he sees a rock. Nick picks up the rock and took a leap of faith and throws the rock. Bullseye, The Prince steps back holding his eye where the rock hit him. Spiderman taking advantage of this situation quickly webs The Prince up and gives him to police to handle.
“Hey kid, thanks,” said Spiderman, “you were a real hero today. See you later.” Spiderman shoots his web and swings away knowing that Nick will be a great kid in the future. After all he saved his life.

“Now you have to go to bed. I held up my part of the deal. Your turn now,” said Jenny.
“Fine but you have to, you have to tell me another story tomorrow or I will tell mom that you, you let me stay up all, all night,” said Ben with a satisfied smile on his face.
“All right you stinker, now go to bed. Good night Ben,” said Jenny.
“Good night,” said Ben, as his eyelids started to slide down. Jenny was satisfied that Ben was all taken care of, now it was time for herself to go to

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