I think that it's not a full answer because the end of it is "his...". I don't know if it's possible to correct it. I like your choice, the character of Lucy Lurie is interesting and your essay will be too, I think. I didn't find the thesis, so it's hard to comment it. I wish you good luck in writing the assignment and hope that soon it will be more answers to comment for our classmates.
I think that it's not a full answer because the end of it is "his...". I don't know if it's possible to correct it. I like your choice, the character of Lucy Lurie is interesting and your essay will be too, I think. I didn't find the thesis, so it's hard to comment it. I wish you good luck in writing the assignment and hope that soon it will be more answers to comment for our classmates.