Personal Narrative: Dicey Debates

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Having found myself in dicey debates with myself regarding commas that would satisfy the need for a mild pause or the full stop that would “totally” serve the same purpose; the fictional yearnings for an existence that would have an unbiased, yet debugging nature that would clarify and put an end to subtle, tricky-little-things have always hovered around my writing table. And here I am, many years later, looking at an opportunity to help a fellow Engineer or a burgeoning scientist shape his/her highly rational thought into a more linguistically cohesive form. The grueling English Grammar classes back in high school has slowly, but steadily helped me build a firm grip on the language. My experience as a freelance writer for organizations and

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