Valentina Juanita Ramon's Murder Mystery

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Valentina Juanita Ramon’s Murder Mystery
The pain to walk around school knowing that one of these little rascals killed my bestfriend.It achs my soul to have to live with that.I will find who ever took Valentinas life and they will pay.Never mess with a latinas life or a knife will appear in your back.It was a very sunny morning with the birds chirping and the small baby birds singing in the morning air.Rosalina was on my way to school with my mom in her car when we pulled up to the school.There was a whole police force surrounding the entire school.I got out of the car and squeeze myself into the crowd of students when I got to the front my body stopped.I could no longer move I was so in shock.I saw blood on the
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Love from your love valentina”.A teardrop fell on the note as my eyes felt like they were going to pop out of their sockets.My face got as red as a tomato and I sobbed for seemed like and hour but was only 10 minutes.I stood up took the box and shoved it in my pocket in my adidas jacket and left the stall.I went to the sink and washed my face now with this i'm going to catch this person face.I myself walked out of the stall slipped down the stairs like a sneaky snake and left school.When I walked back through the direction I came from passing the bracelet I dare not touch.I called an uber and got a ride back home and slept the whole day.The next morning I did not want to wake up at all my mother came into my room.”Honey I have been worried sick about you I have so many questions like how did you get home”.I covered my head so she could not see my swollen eyes and my tomato red face.”stop-p-p-p-p-p mom please I need time to get my head through this”.Rosalina's mom left the room and Rosalina went back to doing nothing .The next day Rosalina woke up early and got ready for school she was now determined to find out who killed her best friend and other things to them.Rosalina's family was shocked to see her in the kitchen

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